I Am Living With an Idiot By Bright White Snow ebook Fiction I Am Living With an Idiot Vena Anderson, a nineteen year old girl has moved away from home to attend college. She has no desire to live in a small dorm room and having to live with a complete stranger, so living in an apartment for her college years is her next option. The only flaw in her plan is that she cant afford it without a roommate. Vena has lived in this apartment all through the past year and just as the new school year is right around the corner, the landlord decided that she would raise the rent. James Hendersom, a nineteen year old guy has been recently kicked out of his dorm for smoking cigarettes. He now has been living with his parents until he can find a place of his own. He has been searching and searching for the past week and could not find anything, until just a few days ago. James was looking through the ads, again and one popped out than all the others sitting on that plain webpage: Looking for roommate. Contact Vena Anderson for further information Book One of the I Am Living With An Idiot series.

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But she complains about James inviting people over He lives there too He doesn t bitch when you invite your friend over all the time without asking him first 6 Vena is obsessed with revenge She wants to get revenge over stupid shit Oh James invited some people over I ll steal his phone charger and 12 sets of his Ray Bans Who owns 12 sets of Ray Bans in the first place Who does petty shit like this 7 Vena is a shit friend She is literally the shittest best friend is history Her best friend s sister dies in a plane crash and her response is to tell him to just get over it His sister just fucking died He has to fucking grieve What kind of friend says this shit Drop that bitch because she s no friend 8 Sex intimate scenes are awkward They re written awkwardly It s like 13 year old wrote it The author may be 13 I don t know It was worded awkwardly If you re going to write sex scenes at least make them good and less like a 13 year old is writing them I don t care if you re a virgin.

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Hi my name is Hailey but I usually go by BrightWhiteSnow Ive been writing for so long I cant give you a set amount of years It seems like writing has become my entire life which doesnt seem to consist of much anyway Anyways like most writers when Im not writing Im reading I dont have very much to tell you about myself considering the fact that most of my identity has been kept a secret I have been writing the I Am Living With an Idiot series for close to four years now and Im currently in the middle of fixing up the disaster I like to call the first book Once I finish the first book I plan to repost it on Wattpad and yknow try and cover up my mistakes I appreciate any comment on my profile whether it be constructi Hi my name is Hailey but I usually go by BrightWhiteSnow I ve been writing for so long I can t give you a set amount of years It seems like writing has become my entire life which doesn t seem to consist of much anyway Anyways like most writers when I m not writing I m reading I don t have very much to tell you about myself considering the fact that most of my identity has been kept a secret I have been writing the I Am Living With an Idiot series for close to four years now and I m currently in the middle of fixing up the disaster I like to call the first book Once I finish the first book I plan to repost it on Wattpad and y know try and cover up my mistakes I appreciate any comment on my profile whether it be constructive criticism or a nice message I ll appreciate it Anyways I m on Wattpad too well that s where I came from but there a bit of me on my profile on there BWS Hailey site_link I have a few problems with this story I had to force myself to finish it At first it just started out as little annoyances with the story But by the end of it I was just irritated at the entire thing As far as writing problems go it s awkward The writing is just awkward It doesn t flow very well Over half the sentences are choppy or run ons The wording of things are awkward and unnecessary I hand unbuckled my seatbelt How else are you going to unbuckle the seatbelt Hand unbuckled is just you pointlessly adding words Then over half the chapters are just fillers There s no advancing of the plot If the chapter doesn t move forward the main plot or a subplot it s not necessary I m not saying you can t add that scene yet but something else needs to be happening in the chapter The entire book needs editing When I made that note on my phone the next chapter I had found out that the chapters that I had just read were edited It was bad editing If it was edited I shouldn t still be finding problems in your spelling Lastly as far as writing problems go the plot is confusing and unclear Is there a plot Is there a point to all of this I couldn t find one What is their goal Even if there is a sequel and there is to this story the first book still needs to have a climax I didn t see one Now I got some character and actual plot problems Of what s there of a plot it s not very well developed It doesn t seem like there was any planning to what was supposed to be happening I ll just go in order of the problems from my list 1 If someone is constantly calling or texting you and you don t want to talk to them block them It s simple Vena doesn t apparently know that exists and spends a lot of time complaining that her ex boyfriend is calling and texting her 2 Vena and James relationship isn t believable It s just whatever is convenient at the time Oh I want them to hate each other right now so they do Two seconds later Oh I want them to get along so they do There was no rhyme or reason as to why they suddenly didn t get along or why they were suddenly fine 3 Vena claims James doesn t care about her or anything but he literally does everything He literally was doing all the cooking brought her out to dinner lunch helped her when she was having a nightmare did the shopping etc But he doesn t care 4 The sarcasm isn t really sarcasm and if that counts as sarcasm nowadays it fucking sucks It s generic as fuck What s up the sky is pretty much the level it s on That s not sarcasm 5 Vena is a fucking hypocrite She breaks all ALL the rules her and James set up in the beginning it still shouldn t be as awkward as the scenes were 9 Apparently people HAVE to be on the same intelligence level to date I was unaware of that unwritten rule Just because someone isn t as smart as you it means they re not good enough to date you Just as PSA for you guys 10 James and Vena s relationship is just about sex It really did just become about them having sex and it was awkwardly written sex like I mentioned At one point James gets made that Vena doesn t want to have sex with him Red fucking flag If someone gets mad at you because you won t have sex with them fucking leave Literally all this couple did was 3 things have sex sleep and fight Fiction Young Adult Romance

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Vena Anderson a nineteen year old girl has moved away from home to attend college She has no desire to live in a small dorm room and having to live with a complete stranger so living in an apartment for her college years is her next option The only flaw in her plan is that she can t afford it without a roommate Vena has lived in this apartment all through the past year and just as the new school year is right around the corner the landlord decided that she would raise the rent James Hendersom a nineteen year old guy has been recently kicked out of his dorm for smoking cigarettes He now has been living with his parents until he can find a place of his own He has been searching and searching for the past week and could not find anything until just a few days ago James was looking through the ads again and one popped out than all the others sitting on that plain webpage Looking for roommate Contact Vena Anderson for further information Book One of the I Am Living With An Idiot series I Am Living With an Idiot.